its okay, however the sound mixing is off. And some of thje voices sound like they are trying to hard to be quiet. and the animation is okay. That's all I can think of.
its okay, however the sound mixing is off. And some of thje voices sound like they are trying to hard to be quiet. and the animation is okay. That's all I can think of.
The cartoon is pretty decent however the pacing in some scenes is pretty bad. Another thing to improve on is the sloppy artstyle, however I feel it doesn't need to be 100% clean. just some parts need to be easier to tell what they are. Also Max's lines have too much static noise.
Pretty funny.
The animation is decent however, the intro dragged on for way too long. The joke would've worked better if they were shown at the end, instead of having the joke explained in the beginning.
well it was just context but i'll just put that in the description
A quick and to the tasteless cartoonist! Icon by @Jaster
Age 22, Male
Animator
Joined on 9/23/16