This cartoon is funny and the animation is pretty decent. However the audio needs a bit of work. Other than that its great.
The audio issues will be resolved in the next episode, thanks for the feedback!
The cartoon is pretty decent however the pacing in some scenes is pretty bad. Another thing to improve on is the sloppy artstyle, however I feel it doesn't need to be 100% clean. just some parts need to be easier to tell what they are. Also Max's lines have too much static noise.
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